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Re: Please check out my site
From Linda at Independent Writer on 17 Nov '99
replying to Re: Please check out my site posted by Tom

Hi, Tom,

Some comments on your FAQ page:

1. I'd use question marks after the questions: "How do I order?" etc.

2. Your terms are a bit confusing. The below seems to mean that you can take money and not deliver the product. I'd add "In this case, you will not be charged for the product" (is this is indeed the case).

"Vitamins-etc.com reserves the right not to ship any product that they see fit."

The site looks very nice and professional to me! Are you trying to compete with Vitamins.com?

Cheers,

Linda




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