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Re: check out this site.
From Deb on 27 Dec '99
replying to check out this site. posted by Aron Shamash

Aron,

Nice design, just needs a couple of tweaks...first...spell check,
as the second sentence contains a typo, and I believe Bayswater is
spelled with a y...you can double check, but I believe that's correct.


To provide a professional format, you must make sure your pages
are grammatically correct!

As for the content, I'd highly recommend photo's for the properties.
You have a photo of the business on the front page, so I'll assume
you have access to a scanner...it would make all the difference in
the world if your clients could have visual images of what is being
described in the text. If you don't have a scanner readily available
it would be a very worthwhile investment (they are fairly inexpensive
these days).

Also, you should include a page where people can feed in their
contact information, including a section for them to describe
properties/locations they are searching for in the London area.
This will allow you to generate business both ways, from your end
and also by matching incoming queries to existing properties.

Looks like you have a fine start and are ahead of the game, as
most realtors aren't even wired yet!

Best of luck,
Deb




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