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Re: 3 months, 10 days and no listing
From Liliane on 23 Feb '02
replying to 3 months, 10 days and no listing posted by rocky

>2. The first 2 sentences have the word "hate" in them.

Never mind the SEs it's not exactly a word any visitor, just
arriving at your site will want to read within the first couple
of lines.

Also, except maybe for the very initiated, I had not clue what
you were talking about, what you wanted to get across with your
site.

It would be better to write an introduction page, what your aim
is, what the site is about and then link to your four other
pages.

Submit this 'home' page and the SEs might look more favourably on
your site.

Good luck




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